Email Marketing

Beyond the subject line: your inbox marketing toolkit

Your email subject line has a tough job. With just a few words, it needs to:

  • Grab the reader’s attention
  • Tell them something useful

That’s a big ask, given that perhaps only around 40 characters will be visible on mobile. There’s only so much screen space before you hit the triple dots of truncation.

Example of a subject line truncated on mobile

But that’s okay, because your subject line isn’t alone out there.

Preview text

Message previews – or preheaders as they’re widely and perhaps erroneously called in the marketing world – pull some opening text content from your email into the inbox. That lets the user see some information up-front before deciding if an email is worth opening. The number of characters pulled into the preview varies depending on device and email client.

Brands commonly use the preview text as a secondary subject line of sorts. This is often combined with a trick to blank out any trailing content such as nav bar links, thus making it look neat and tidy in the inbox. It’s worth mentioning that Apple Mail recently disabled this trick as it essentially suppresses the message preview’s originally intended functionality.

In any case, the message preview is valuable pre-open content for you to work with. Use it in conjunction with your subject line to inform the reader rather than bait them.

Sender name

Well, that’s done already is it not? Sender is your brand name, and that’s that. Not necessarily!

There’s some flexibility in your sender name. Adding an individual’s name, where relevant and true, can add a personal touch. Person at YourBrand might just give your emails a more human touch than YourBrand alone.

The sender name can also be tailored to the nature of the email. A separate sender name for editorial emails like newsletters can help to distinguish them from purely marketing content. The Biz @ The Email Factory for instance!

BIMI

I killed some time on a flight recently by playing a logo quiz on my phone. Our ability to recognise and recall logos, or even portions thereof, is proof of their power. A brand’s logo is its face, and our brains are masterful at processing faces.

That brings us to BIMI: Brand Indicators for Message Identification. Appropriately for an acronym that sounds a bit like “be me”, this is a means of showing your brand logo in the inbox. The instant power of brand recognition could be the deciding factor between open and ignore.

Mock-up of a logo shown via BIMI

Annotations

Gmail has built-in functionality that allows marketers to show additional content in the promotions tab. These are known as email annotations. They come in two main flavours.

Deals let you show an offer – perhaps a discount – completely separate from your subject line. An optional offer code, start and end date round it off. After all, your customer cares about what your email has to offer them. Everything else is just wrapping.

Product carousels are perfect for retailers. A horizontally scrollable array of products, browsable and clickable without ever having to open the email.

It’s worth mentioning that senders must first contact Google for approval before these features become available. If you don’t ask, you don’t get!

Emojis

Love them or hate them, emojis are a part of internet life. Although they’re not a piece of inbox anatomy like the items above, emojis are so distinct from traditional alphanumeric copywriting that they deserve special mention.

There is some evidence to suggest that emojis in subject lines can increase email open rates. That statement would carry a lot more weight were it not for the presence of “some” and “can”. Ultimately, like most aspects of marketing, it depends. It depends on your brand, your choice of emoji, how often you use them, your creativity.

Used correctly – whatever that may mean for your brand – emojis can pair with creative copywriting in an engaging way. Just be sure not to use too many, or interrupt sentences. Accessibility matters.

A collective effort

It’s reassuring to see that the competition for inbox attention isn’t solely determined by the subject line. In fact, it may not even be the most important factor in determining opens. The life of a subject line isn’t such a lonely one after all.

Email Marketing

Is ChatGPT the messiah or a very naughty boy?

Is ChatGPT for email marketing subject lines the Messiah or a very naughty boy?

So with Intuit Mailchimp running nationwide radio advertising announcing its new subject line analytics tool, for the record we built something very similar back in 2018 and you can read about it here. Subject line optimisation and the role ChatGPT could have in it has become increasingly prevalent. Every second post on LinkedIn seems to be about ChatGPT and how it’s going to revolutionise content writing and that includes subject lines.

Having tested ChatGPT for subject line content generation exhaustively, here are my thoughts. I preface this by saying these are my thoughts, not that of the business but those of one cynic who works for the company, just in case Microsoft come after us. Needless to say my conclusion is… ChatGPT is a fraud! There I said it.

ChatGPT does not generate better subject lines for open rates. I can’t write email copy using it without having to edit it enormously. Actually taking more time on the edit than it would if I wrote my stream of consciousness!

For the purposes of this blog let’s concentrate on subject lines. I asked it for 5 subject lines for an electronics company selling TVs and it came up with the below.

The results were as follows

ChatGPT question on subject lines
Generate 5 email subject lines

Now I thought these a bit “Stateside” and as I am based in the UK and wanted to compare it to UK companies’ subject lines I changed the question to reflect that…

ChatGPT UK version of subject lines
Generate 5 email subject lines in the UK

ChatGPT thought it important to inform people that this was for UK TVs showing a scant understanding or “intelligence” of the actual requirement. Now some of you will say that perhaps I should have been smarter with my question but and here’s the rub – if I can be smart enough to ask the question in a way that ChatGPT spits out a killer set of subject lines, then I can probably write those subject lines myself way quicker. I’ve already spent more time than I’d like to have done asking the 2 questions and not getting answers I could use.

So then I took a real life situation.

I took 5 subject lines from a client which had been used in specific campaigns and asked which one it thought would be most successful. The first time I did it, it ignored the first subject line because I hadn’t put it on a separate line from the question. It then subsequently said the following…

ChatGPT subject line performance
Which subject line would perform better

So I asked my question again but this time put the first subject line on its own in the question. ChatGPT then contradicts itself from the first set of questions and decides that the subject line that was missed out was in fact the best but the one it previously said was the best is now not so good because it’s too generic. But it doesn’t move it down from 1st to 2nd but from 1st to 3rd!

ChatGPT subject line performance
Which of these subject lines would perform better

So I asked it to rank them in order of effectiveness and it said this

ChatGPT subject line rankings
Rank these subject lines by performance

What happens if you apply real intelligence instead of artificial?

Now I have real life data, I have a subject line tool which we built in house, which I can ask the above questions and get real answers. You can read about it here or Dela Quist’s SubjectLinePro or even Intuit Mailchimp’s version of our tool but ChatGPT, well I found it wasn’t useful at all. In fact it got things completely wrong.

So in order of their effectiveness in real life marketing solutions the rankings were…

1. Superb Sale savings… starting online today!

2. Our best 85” TV megadeal ever…

3. Samsung, LG TV and soundbar offers for an improved home cinema experience

4. Inflation-busting TV megadeals including a Samsung 70″ at £699…

5. Bring your TV to life 

And to remind you what ChatGPT said

  1. Samsung, LG TV and soundbar offers for an improved home cinema experience
  2. Inflation-busting TV megadeals including a Samsung 70″ at £699…
  3. Superb Sale savings… starting online today!
  4. Our best 85” TV megadeal ever…
  5. Bring your TV to life

At least we all agree that last one was the least effective. So my advice is, while AI is great and ChatGPT in particular is fun to play around with I will take real intelligence over artificial intelligence any day of the week! So in conclusion ChatGPT is a very naughty boy!

Data

Subject Line Analysis at your fingertips

Subject Line Analysis Tool

In some ways, a subject line can be the most important part of your email. If you don’t entice people to open your email, then they won’t click through to your website, which is pretty much the point of an email marketing campaign!

It can sometimes be tricky though to come up with the perfect subject line, and this is where A/B testing can come in – testing different types of subject lines against each other and picking the winner.

But are companies just stopping there, and not absorbing each newly gleaned bit of information about their subject line performance to trickle down to the next one? There is a wealth of information at your fingertips from historical campaigns if you just know where to look.

Well, we know where to look! Our subject line analysis tool lets you compare a planned subject line with your previously used subject lines to gauge how well it may perform.

We also have the ability, for non-clients, to compare subject lines against our entire database, which we can share the results of, whilst keeping everything anonymous.

And if that’s not enough, we can also take subject lines from your ESP campaigns and slot them into your own version of the tool.

How does it work?

All you have to do it enter your subject line (and if you are planning on using personalised fields add those inside {{ }} so they are flagged). Your proposed subject line will then be analysed by our algorithm for its component parts, including:

  • Length
  • Use of emojis
  • Use of personalisation like first names
  • Characters like exclamation marks or question marks
  • Capitalised words
  • Social media hash tags

This will then be compared against your database, and against the benchmarks set by all available data we have, so you can see how your data compares against the masses.

Then you can make an educated guess about just how successful your subject line may be.

Results and Insights

Looks like emojis are a good idea…

Emoji results

Social media too…

Social Media results

Maybe lay back on the exclamation marks…

Exclamation Mark Results

Let’s see how the top matches did…

Top Matching

Of course the more data you have, the more insight you can extract. If you’ve only ever sent one campaign with, say, an emoji it can unfairly skew the results. You need to build up a big enough pool to make tangible comparisons from to help guide your subject line building processes. Speaking of guides, we have a great one for the best way to conduct A/B testing.

Generic Insights

Maybe you haven’t started yet and just want to get a feel for what generally does or doesn’t work for subject lines. We have pulled together some more generic stats:

Generic Comparison

True, this one is a bit obvious, but we have many more where this came from – we can’t give away all the goodies for free!

If this tool piques your interest, why not contact Mike, mike@displayblock.com, or Tony, tony@displayblock.com for more information, or call 0131 557 7780.